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| Tempest Kiro |
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 3:16 pm |
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| confuzzled kc |
| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 10:13 pm |
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:O
I'm not there on the list! *cries* |
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| jcbng |
| Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 11:57 pm |
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OWNED!......
*runs* |
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| mad1dude |
| Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 7:37 am |
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confuzzled kc wrote: :O
I'm not there on the list! *cries*
That's right! My character eliminated yours even before you made it into the fanfic itself :p |
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| figgie |
| Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 12:02 pm |
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 is this just gonna turn out to be a Hiroaki bloodbath?  |
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 2:50 pm |
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Oops...
Casey-san!!! I've put you in!!! I'm so sorry!!!
And Hiro-san blood bath....
*begins to whistle innocently* |
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| ubslasherx |
| Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 9:43 pm |
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Lol Rapidshare wont let me download more >_> oh well...
So far theres a few spelling and grammar errors but it is still understandable =]
Prolly tomorrow I will read the entire thing... I look forward to it =]
Somebody needs to get Ayako's attention to this =] |
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 8:01 am |
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Yay!!! XD!!!
Thanks for reading!!!
However... I am an ESL student so I might have a few errors..... But I edited it... I thought I picked out all the errors...
Oh well... this is what happens when my editor is busy with the HSC>>
And I've alerted Ayako-san to its existance already, she's been directed to the special preview page for the cast. |
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| Patryn |
| Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 9:20 am |
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| xD so funny! luv it! hahahaha. ^^ |
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 8:49 pm |
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Thank you... I'm so glad you think that!
You don't think I was over doing it a bit in that.... scene do you? XD!!!
I mean... it passed censorship and all.... but what would Hiro-san or Ayako-san say?!
XD!!!
Oh well... censorship's fault!!! XD!!! |
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2007 9:13 am |
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chapters 7-9 are up!
Enjoy!!! XD!!! |
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| Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2007 2:46 pm |
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Chapters 10 and 11 are up!
Please R& R!!!! |
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| Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 6:02 pm |
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Patryn wrote: xD so funny! luv it! hahahaha. ^^
I have to agree with Patryn, Nora! As much as I would like to avoid admitting it, I am quite enjoying your fanfiction and demand MOAR! Ugh, fan fiction. I feel so unclean now...or is that because I haven't showered for 3 days? Oh no, did I just say that out loud? |
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| Minty |
| Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:58 am |
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Hahahah.
Ouch >< Very addictive ... bah cliffhangers! |
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 2:02 pm |
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Yes I agree ^^
My cliff hangers are evil.
Well I have the cure for that!
Chapters 12-14 are up!
The third main character and the minor characters finally make their appearance! |
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:15 pm |
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Chapters 15-17 are up!
Now you find out what happened to Hiro-san ^^ |
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| Vonbon |
| Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 4:53 am |
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For amusements sake, check out the third place winner of the World of Warcraft/The Ataris Music Video Contest at Machinima.
I find an amusing similarity in ideas. |
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 8:55 am |
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Chapter 18 and 19 are up!!
And I just watched that video....
I think the characters I used looked much better.....
Besides... we probably got the ideas from the same place... DOT HACK!!!! |
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| Minty |
| Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 10:50 am |
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Aaaaarrrggggghhhhh!
So cruel!
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 12:05 pm |
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Minty wrote: Aaaaarrrggggghhhhh!
So cruel!
Lol yeah.... but considering the fact that we're drawing up to the end... all we're going to have now is cliffhangers...
Hang in there!!! XD!!
Not long to go!!!! |
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 6:44 am |
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Chapter 20 - 22 are up!!
And guess what!!! Almost over!!!!
Rejoice!!! XD!!!
Writing one chapter per day is pretty harrowing. Especially in the HSC trial period!!! XD!!!
Well, however.... I have been informed how evil my set of [to be continued]s are.... So from now on out, the fanfic shall be updated once every two days!!!! |
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| Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 7:40 am |
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Chapter 23 and 24 are up!
Enjoy!!! |
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| Minty |
| Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:45 pm |
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Kusoooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Also liked the mirror bit. Love the writing, serious as it is, it makes me laugh in a lot of places ^_^ |
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| DarkYoshii |
| Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 11:20 pm |
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Good read!!
Needs more DarkYoshii/Hiro Paladin WoW Action!
Us Paladins shall never die!
Which reminds me. Hiro, finally got my own account and rolled a pally on your server. |
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 8:31 am |
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Thanks for the reviews!
Glad you liked the mirror scene in the story Minty ^^
However I must profess.... I don't think Ayako-san is that vain.... Everyone must agree that she is naturally beutiful!
Even Hiro-san's probably more vain ^^
And to Dark Yoshii, thank you for reading. I've never played WoW before so I wouldn't know how good paladin's are.....
Before I did the story, I didn't even know what WoW was.... ^^''''
Thank you for reading everyone!!!
Chapters 25 and 26 are up!!! The final posting of chapter!!!
And for all those who can't be bothered downloading from rapidshare but still wants to read, the online version shall be up and running soon!!! |
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| Minty |
| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 9:06 pm |
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Woah! Hahahaha!!
Heh, the last lines made me laugh. Completely unexpected but fantastically written ending! And that goes for the story as a whole. Wow! (and not just of the Warcraft variety!)
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| Tempest Kiro |
| Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 8:15 am |
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Thank you for the review!!! Glad you liked it!!!
Well the online versions are up and running.
I had to split it into two volumes because the site can't take more than 25 chapters..... and I have 26.... =,='''
Well, to access them go to
http://bebo.com/Hirofic -1st half
http://bebo.com/Ayafic -2nd half
The online version has a few draw backs compared to the original version. The biggest is that there is only one font and no italics, underlining or bolding can be used.....
So much of the irony is lost in translation.
The original will still be available for download. (Just incase the crappy font is not to your taste) |
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| JOSX |
| Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 9:52 pm |
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| mad1dude |
| Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 7:28 am |
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Well, Jacky, that's because......
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